Research Paper Outline

Wai Sing Lam
October 27, 2010

Research Paper Outline

Preliminary Thesis: Men hope to be the more dominated gender by focusing on their physical appearance and by showing off their strong and confident personality, have led to the shorter life span of men that causes high death rate, men's demand to apply sexual appeal, men lack of superiority well being toward themselves, the potential health risks men face, the lack to make the right decision for men health, and the demand for body changes, has many men lack of concern for their own health, because it is seen as an unmanly like thing men should be worry about.


I. Shorter life span.
A. unable body men wants more medical help.
B. able body men focus on being more muscular, while at the time seek less
medical assistant.
C. quotation from article page 102 or 103.


Analysis: This allow men to be reluctant in seeking professional help even when men and women have equality to receive medical help to help maintain men dignity.


II. Demand for sexual appeal to risk more likely of STI possibilities
A. being built means being the sexual subject or test when it comes to sexual intercourse.
B. Focus on well built body that led to attraction by female that leads to men risking potential STI.
C. quotation from book page 67-68.


Analysis: men lack to seek for health or professional help leads to potential sexual transmitted infections like Hiv or Aids.


III. lack well being at a young to and full time man.
A. Young men focus on being tough, strong, and taking big risk in life rather than focusing on health.
B. Men are focus on jobs and sports after childhood is over and will only show signs of worrying about their health if it doesn't allow them to look weak in other men eyes.
C. Quotation from article page 102.


Analysis: Men start out already given a future plan on the day of their born. Men's already show lack of health and the path men take are dangerous and will lead into minor to severe health injuries and risk.


IV. Potential health risk men could face overtime.
A. Men fought in dangerous wars to show off their power, thus leading to potential illness after a few year services that include: itching, rashes, pains, etc.
B. During war's, men face dangerous obstacles and attack from enemy leading to hurtful bones, rashes, and damaged or missing body parts.
C. Susie Karshaw describes potential health risk due to lack of men masculine to ignore it in her book, Impotent warriors Gulf War syndrome, vulnerability and masculinity saying, "He wanted it to be read and wanted others to make sense of it; indeed, he suggested that he would be willing to undergo an invasive internal exam in order to discover the secrets his body holds." (page 72).


Analysis: Men doing dangerous task since as skateboarding and being part of the army gives many men potential injured and risks. Men particularly has potential risk, but lack to worry about it till after they lose an arm or leg or are close to death.


V. Men showing very low interest in taking care of themselves.
A. Men seek more likely to take up on drugs and more likely to end up killing themselves.
B. At a small age men can compress to hide their emotions and feeling to prevent themselves to be characterized as a weakling among they fellow men's.
C. Quotation from article page 166 or 167.


Analysis: Men's taking drugs and their desire to hide they emotional side leads the male gender into a stage that could lead to something bad. whether it be jail or even death. Some consider drugs as the answer to life problem without realizing their is physical and mental help to cure men of these illness and desires.


VI. Men physical appearance demands for improvement.
A. Quotation of article starts from bottom of page 335.
B. Men's solely focus on losing weight for physical appearance only to be involved in sports and other man built activities.
C. Men are unhappy about their certain bodies, mostly because their are the victim of being picked on by bullies.


Analysis: Men's solely focus less on health, so that their could be muscular fit. To obtain power to overpower those who had seek to attack or hurt them. Men's focus less on health in order to help particular in sports for a good school or for the ability to overcome their bullies if it is the case. Men wants the power to dominate.